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jmc2009

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[交流] 中译英三句话,急,特急~~~

1、在太阳能电池背膜制备过程中,改变其配方中二异氰酸酯的种类、含量以及测试试样的制备条件。

2、通过测试各条件下背膜与EVA剥离强度,找到一种优于现有的配方的固化剂和最佳使用条件,使背膜与EVA剥离强度最大,最终达到改良太阳能电池的目的。

3、研究表明,当异氰酸根与羟基的比例由0.8变化到1.2时,背膜与EVA的粘结力逐渐变小,这说明羟基剩余量愈多,背膜与EVA粘结力越大。
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zsw4882535

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谢谢

jmc2009(金币+10): 2010-06-18 14:34:44
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Originally posted by noleg at 2010-06-17 19:56:07:
我有意见!
1. LZ的中文表达含混不清,难怪人家英文翻译语无伦次。一句完整的话,应该能分出个主谓宾来。
The type and content of diisocyanate in the chemical formulation and the condition for preparati ...

1.preparation of testing sample 中的“待测样品”的表述值得商榷。

2.第一句因该是描述实验的手段或者过程,应该用动作句式,就是表示怎样做,而不应该是静止句式,只是强调结果。

3.小弟不才,语无伦次,如何不分主谓宾,请详细指教,不甚感激!!!
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zsw4882535

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jmc2009(金币+60, 翻译EPI+1):先给60,我先看看。 2010-06-17 17:00:51
wypward:谢谢参与 2010-06-17 17:15:47
翻译如下:

1.In the process of preparing the back membrane  of solar cell , change the type and quality of diisocyanate in the chemical formulation ,and the Preparation Conditions of the sample that is to be tested.

2.Find a chemical formulation and a curing agent better than the exciting ones ,and the best way of using them by testing the peelstrength between back membrane and EVA ,to maximize the value of the peelstrength between back membrane  and EVA , and ultimately to improve the property of the solar cell .

3.It is shown by the research that , as the ratio of iso-thio-cyano to hydroxy chaning from 0.8 to 1.2 , the cohesive force between back membrane  and EVA decreased gradually ,which means the more the quality of residuary hydroxy ,the stronger the cohesive force between back membrane  and EVA.

嘿嘿,楼主,又是我,相关词汇在你的上一相关主题中已经提供,这里就不再重复了。
注意:太阳能电池的”背膜“的英文是“ back membrane ”


[ Last edited by zsw4882535 on 2010-6-17 at 16:31 ]
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2楼2010-06-17 16:22:04
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noleg

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发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-06-18 09:16:23
jmc2009(金币+15): 2010-06-18 14:34:36
我有意见!
1. LZ的中文表达含混不清,难怪人家英文翻译语无伦次。一句完整的话,应该能分出个主谓宾来。
The type and content of diisocyanate in the chemical formulation and the condition for preparation of testing sample were changed, in the process of preparing the back membrane  of solar cell.
2. A new curing agent better than that in existing formulation and its best service condition were found after testing in various condition, so that the membrane-EVA peel strength was maximized and the performance of solar cell was finally improved.
3. The result showed that back membrane-EVA cohesive force reduced as the ratio of isocyanate to hydroxy varied from 0.8 to 1.2, which means the more the excess quantity of hydroxy, the stronger the cohesive force between back membrane and EVA.
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iamweipu

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发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-06-18 09:16:40
jmc2009(金币+5): 2010-06-18 14:34:50
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Originally posted by zsw4882535 at 2010-06-17 08:29:05:



1.preparation of testing sample 中的“待测样品”的表述值得商榷。

2.第一句因该是描述实验的手段或者过程,应该用动作句式,就是表示怎样做,而不应该是静止句式,只是强调结果。

3.小弟不才,语无 ...

原文应该是论文中的一段话,既然用于论文中,理论上就不能使用动作句式,当然这也有LZ提供的原文的问题啦!而且你用的一些句型也很少在正式论文中出现,比如第三句"It is shown by the research",呵呵~你楼上(3楼)的翻译其实蛮好的呀,可以学习一下!

[ Last edited by iamweipu on 2010-6-17 at 09:38 ]
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