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Dear Mr. Xu Jinxia,

Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision.  

For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.

If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript.

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Reviewers' comments:

The paper is not well written in English.  Thorough revision is neccesary.  
In addition, the following amendmenst are requested.
1. " representaion" is not recommended as a technical term.  "index", "parameter" or "factor" is suggested.
2. Are the chemical compositions of steel correct, as the percentage of weight at page 4? By the way,, "wt%" is not recommended.
3. What is "analytical reagent grade" ?   It is not internationally used.
4. Configuration of the specimen is missing.
5. All chemical values are to be estimated prior to immersion.  Otherwise, they are not to be compared.
6. Do niot start the sentense with abbreviation as "Fig.".
7. At page 8, -- NaCl are few than -- ?  not readable.
8. What are physical or chemical meaning of an approximated equations in Fig. 2.   It acutally is useless.
9. Do not carelessly use "future tense" in a scientific paper.
10. I table 2, total chloride values are different from Fig. 5.

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