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从图5中可以看出,三个区域在20℃时候应力相似,但是当温度升高到130℃时候,三个区域的应力出现很大的差异,热影响区的应力值最高,焊缝的应力值最低。
   
我翻译成:
   As can be seen in Fig. 5, all three regions have similar strength levels at 20℃, but as the temperature increases to 130℃, there is a large variation in the proof stress values that of weld metal having the lowest value and the HAZ having the highest value.

   审稿意见说我这个话有问题,请大侠指点?

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Originally posted by bancage at 2010-03-15 19:10:51:
我觉得是后面那句有点问题 就是这句
there is a large variation in the proof stress values that of weld metal having the lowest value and the HAZ having the highest value.

你是想用同位语从句还是什 ...

谢谢你!

我为了使句子简单些,这样写了:
All three regions have similar strength levels at 20℃, while there is a large variation as the temperature increas to the 130℃.

你看这个句子有问题吗?
谢谢了 !
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yujunhui(金币+1):thank you 2010-03-16 11:45
我觉得是后面那句有点问题 就是这句
there is a large variation in the proof stress values that of weld metal having the lowest value and the HAZ having the highest value.

你是想用同位语从句还是什么呢  不过我觉得可以这么写
there is a large variation in the proof stress values of the three regions with weld metal having the lowest value and the HAZ having the highest value.

不知道对不对  仅供参考 呵呵
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yujunhui(金币+1): 2010-03-17 16:44
恩 我觉得应该没有大问题咯 不过有点小问题呢 看
as the temperature increases to 130℃.

1 increases 写错咯
2 130°C前面就不要the了吧 呵呵
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yujunhui(金币+1): 2010-03-17 16:45
As can be seen in Fig. 5, all three regions have the similar strength level at 20℃, while there is a large variation in the proof stress values at 130℃, which weld metal has the lowest value and the HAZ with the highest value(定语从句)
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