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yling_2008

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[交流] 帮忙修改英文表达,谢谢

正在写一篇英语论文,其中几句话的表述自己感觉也不是很恰当,请大家帮忙看看,有没有明显的错误或者有没有更好的表述,谢谢

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It is suggested from microstructural analysis results that deformation and thermal treatments generate the inhomogeneities through the thickness of the plate.

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The aim of this paper is to present the origin of the inhomogeneity and the microstructure/texture/strength relationships in the 2519 aluminum alloy thick plate.

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EDS analysis confirms two different kinds of Cu-containing particles i.e. Al7Cu2Fe and Al2CuMg, as shown in Fig.3(c) and Fig.3(d).

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The schematic diagram showing variation of the shear deformation through the thickness is shown in Fig.8.
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phyweiw

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yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:28
2. This paper was aimed at exploring the origin of the …………..
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phyweiw

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yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:27
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The microstructural analyses suggested that the inhomogeneity throughout the cross-section of the plate is due to the deformation and thermal treatments.
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phyweiw

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yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:28
yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:28
yling_2008(金币+2): 2010-02-02 21:28
3.Two different kinds of Cu-containing particles i.e. Al7Cu2Fe and Al2CuMg, as shown in Fig.3(c) and Fig.3(d). were confirmed by EDS analyses.
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phyweiw

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yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:28
yling_2008(金币+1): 2010-02-02 21:29
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The schematic diagram depicting the variation of the shear deformation through the corss-sectioin is shown in Fig.8.
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