[交流] 请教翻译一个很简单的句子

Originally posted by twister at 2009-8-29 15:32:
上面As phase-wide targets achieved gradually 可以去掉“are”
或者再简单一点As targets achieved gradually ，感觉gradually就有“阶段”的感觉，英语翻译没必要锱铢必较吧。

Originally posted by pitlord999 at 2009-8-29 22:34:


如果去掉are的话，那么把as换成with更好。用as的话，还是带上are更顺溜。