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After reviewing the manuscript, I (Editor-in-Chief) feel the folowing: The manuscript has many technical problems. Charge - discharge values represent significant coulombic inefficiencies. Al foil in the voltage of 4.8v - 1.5v, Al is not stable in this range.


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