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yuanshan8713: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 哇哦，果然不一样了，太感谢了 2016-05-26 08:03:19
你写的即生硬，缺乏可读性，又没能完全反映出你想说的话，有缩手缩脚的感觉。
Vitreous amyloidosis is a rare vitreous degeneration, which can occur either as an isolated disease, or as an ocular involvement of systemic amyloidosis. We reported a case of vitreous opacity with unknown origin. The patient was clinically diagnosed with Vitreous amyloidosis with TTR Lys55Asn and confirmed after 23G vitreous surgery with histology and genetic testing.
Lys55Asn就是突变了，所以后面不要再加上 mutation了；unknown origin 也许用 unknown cause更合适；histology 比 cytology 更准确。 |
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