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[求助] 有一句英文,自己翻译完了,请高手帮忙改改。多谢

中文:结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。

英文:The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, which indicated that three steps take place.

或者: The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, it indicates that three steps take place.

再或者: The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, which indicated that three steps occurred during the adsorption process.

我有些晕,第三句话我觉得有些啰嗦。请高手帮助改改。多谢。

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没有一句不罗嗦,罗嗦点就算了,而且都不是正确的英文。

你的阶段和步骤实质上应该是一回事,对不?
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusions of adsorption of A and B were two-step and three-step processes, respectively.
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结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。
The results showed that the intraparticle diffusion for adsorption A was in two different stages while that for adsorption B was in three processes.

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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2016-04-06 00:05:01
没有一句不罗嗦,罗嗦点就算了,而且都不是正确的英文。

你的阶段和步骤实质上应该是一回事,对不?
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusions of adsorption of A and B were two-step and thre ...

是这样的,对于A和B,中间是有讨论的,所以要分开说,不能写在一起,你看怎么说才好呢?
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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2016-04-06 00:05:01
没有一句不罗嗦,罗嗦点就算了,而且都不是正确的英文。

你的阶段和步骤实质上应该是一回事,对不?
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusions of adsorption of A and B were two-step and thre ...

你看看这么说可以吗? The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While that for adsorption B, it indicates that three steps take place.
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5楼: Originally posted by NY_sky at 2016-04-05 21:31:55
你看看这么说可以吗? The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While that for adsorption B, it indicates that three steps take pla ...

要分开说?
你提供的句子不能用,可以考虑:
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages, while that OF adsorption B was a three-step process.
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6楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2016-04-06 10:43:07
要分开说?
你提供的句子不能用,可以考虑:
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages, while that OF adsorption B was a three-step  ...

我还是没有说明白 sorry
结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。………………而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。
………省略号我还有略微详细的讨论。是i这样的分开说。
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读不透。Lz是指两种物质A&B在吸附中的内扩散过程按不同阶段进行的吗?
离成功还差一点
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8楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2016-04-06 11:47:10
读不透。Lz是指两种物质A&B在吸附中的内扩散过程按不同阶段进行的吗?

嗯,我认为A的吸附经历了两个阶段,(然后进行讨论)。B的吸附经历了三个阶段,(讨论)。因此,怎么写才好呢?
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7楼: Originally posted by NY_sky at 2016-04-05 21:52:31
我还是没有说明白 sorry
结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。………………而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。
………省略号我还有略微详细的讨论。是i这样的分开说。...

如果中间还有一大段,那么可以重复前面一句。

The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. ………… In comparison, it was shown that the intra-particle diffusion of adsorption B was a three-step …………
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