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[求助] 有一句英文,自己翻译完了,请高手帮忙改改。多谢

中文:结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。

英文:The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, which indicated that three steps take place.

或者: The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, it indicates that three steps take place.

再或者: The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While for B, which indicated that three steps occurred during the adsorption process.

我有些晕,第三句话我觉得有些啰嗦。请高手帮助改改。多谢。
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没有一句不罗嗦,罗嗦点就算了,而且都不是正确的英文。

你的阶段和步骤实质上应该是一回事,对不?
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusions of adsorption of A and B were two-step and three-step processes, respectively.
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5楼: Originally posted by NY_sky at 2016-04-05 21:31:55
你看看这么说可以吗? The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. While that for adsorption B, it indicates that three steps take pla ...

要分开说?
你提供的句子不能用,可以考虑:
The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages, while that OF adsorption B was a three-step process.
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7楼: Originally posted by NY_sky at 2016-04-05 21:52:31
我还是没有说明白 sorry
结果表明,内扩散吸附A出现了两种不同的阶段。………………而对于吸附B,则出现了三个步骤。
………省略号我还有略微详细的讨论。是i这样的分开说。...

如果中间还有一大段,那么可以重复前面一句。

The results showed that the intra-particle diffusion of the adsorption of A occurred in two different stages. ………… In comparison, it was shown that the intra-particle diffusion of adsorption B was a three-step …………
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