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论文大修，审稿人的意见我真心不知道怎么回复。 已有2人参与
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如题： 基本情况：两个审稿意见，编辑给的大修的机会。 第一个审稿人的意见已经回答完了，下面是第二个审稿人意见，求指点迷津。（英语写作已经找语言公司了，请大家不要纠结这个语言问题了） Reviewer #2 (Remarks to the Author): The so called "nano-specific" toxicity is a discipline that has seen several papers published, yet there seems to be no consensus if indeed this effect is manifested. A recent review in the journal, Curr Opin Biotechnol. 2013, 724-34, titled, "Nanotoxicity: challenging the myth of nano-specific toxicity" by Donaldson K1, Poland CA have challenged this notion. This manuscript attempts to identify a neglected facet regarding toxicity and uses ZnO nanoparticles against a yeast strain. While the subject matter may be of interest, the manuscript is replete with sentence that are not structured properly, and there are numerous phrases and terms that are not clear. In addition, there are several trivial matters such as the formula for titanium dioxide that are written wrongly! Given, the facts that the manuscript is written poorly, and that the objectives of this work are not clearly articulated, and most importantly the fact that this work does not advance significantly (at least it was not clear to this reviewer from this work and who has studied the activity of ZnO) our understanding of nano-specific toxicity, this work is best published in a specialized journal. |
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还是创新的问题，你应该在论文的前introduction的部分对以前的研究有一个详细的综述，尤其是审稿人提及的文章。让他看到你的文章的不同和创新点。 发自小木虫Android客户端 |
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