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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2016-01-26 21:28:15
welzgx: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2016-01-28 09:32:23
1) Biomass energy of Iran sustainable agricultural crops and residues is researched in detail in this paper.
2) It can be seen from the paper that authors have done tremendous work in the research.
3) The structure of the whole paper is good and the data are detailed. The tables and figures could explicitly express what authors want to say. The language is fluent.
4) But there are still some small problems in this paper, e.g., some sentences are not proficient and exact enough, and there are some grammar errors.
5) Authors listed a lot of data about various crops in each province of Iraq. Although these data can provide some information for the readers, I don't think they are of great value. They can be simplified.
6) This sentence is not clearly expressed, especially fermentable sugars with protein (18%) and lipids (1%). Actually protein and lipids are not included in fermentable sugars.
7) Though I can guess what this sentence means, it still needs to be modified as there are some logic errors. The same to the other similar errors in this sentence. |
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