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发文章,编辑说下面这段话需要 review language edits throughout article to ensure they preserve your intended meaning


这段话是这样的:
It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes. The electrodes have high selectivity, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components.Some mediators have been fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption.

意思为:据信,电极表面修饰可以减少许多电极过程的过电位,使电极具有更好的选择性,从而可以分辩出溶液中各种组分的电化学信号。一些介质可以通过吸附的方法固定于电极表面。


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kongxiangshi

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我也来说两句吧:
It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes.By modification electrode can obtain a higher selectivity,so that it can exculpate electroanalytical signals from solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface to modificat the electrode surface.
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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes. Furthermore, the electrodes have high selectivity, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components.
最后一句话Some mediators have been fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption.与第二句是何关系?这要说明后,我才能改啊。

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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce the  overvoltage in many electrode processes. The electrodes with high selectivity,  can sepatate the electroanalytical signals of components in the solution .Some mediators can  be fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption.
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是不是要表达上面的意思?

It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes and improve the selectivity of  electrodes, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface to modificat the electrode surface.
是不是要表达上面的意思?

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