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发文章，编辑说下面这段话需要 review language edits throughout article to ensure they preserve your intended meaning 这段话是这样的： It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes. The electrodes have high selectivity, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components.Some mediators have been fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption. 意思为：据信，电极表面修饰可以减少许多电极过程的过电位，使电极具有更好的选择性，从而可以分辩出溶液中各种组分的电化学信号。一些介质可以通过吸附的方法固定于电极表面。 求高手改正，急急急！！！ [ Last edited by zzgyb on 2009-4-22 at 16:05 ] |
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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes. Furthermore, the electrodes have high selectivity, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components. 最后一句话Some mediators have been fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption.与第二句是何关系?这要说明后，我才能改啊。 英文的句子之间要有关联词，否则，显得前后孤立 |
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| It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce the overvoltage in many electrode processes. The electrodes with high selectivity, can sepatate the electroanalytical signals of components in the solution .Some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface by adsorption. |
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是不是要表达上面的意思？
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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes and improve the selectivity of electrodes, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface to modificat the electrode surface. 是不是要表达上面的意思？ [ Last edited by DifficultFlying on 2008-9-27 at 11:21 ] |
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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes and then induce higher electrodes selectivity, which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface.So it can be a method for electrode surface modification . 是不是要表达上面的意思？ |
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It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes,which can make the electrodes have higher selectivity in order to distingwish the electroanalytical signals of the solution components.Some mediators have been fixed on the electrode surface by the way of adsorption. 我觉得第一个句子（中文）逻辑性比较强，翻译时要能表达出你所要表现的逻辑关系来最好了。 我的翻译提供给您参考。 |
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我也来说两句吧： It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes.By modification electrode can obtain a higher selectivity,so that it can exculpate electroanalytical signals from solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface to modificat the electrode surface.  |
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刚才看到一个更合适的词汇－as a consequence
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再次修改后 ------------------------------------------------------------ It is believed that electrode surface modification can reduce overvoltage of many electrode processes and as a consequence of that electrodes selectivity becomse more high , which can separate the electroanalytical signals of the solution components. By adsorption, some mediators can be fixed on the electrode surface.So it can be a method for electrode surface modification . |
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