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[求助] 求达人润色一段英文摘要

求达人润色一段摘要:摘要:本文对两种常用防毒面具罩体材料的性能进行了表征。结果表明:在目前的生产配方及硫化条件下,NR罩体材料的拉伸强度为22.0MPa、撕破强力为41.3KN∙m-1,高于CIIR罩体材料的13.2MPa和35.5KN∙m-1,NR罩体具有较高力学性能的原因在于其能够产生应变诱导结晶;NR罩体和CIIR罩体材料的回弹率分别为60%和16%,芥子气在两种罩体中的扩散系数分别为6.85×10-13m2/s和2.10×10-11m2/s,CIIR罩体材料较低的回弹率和优良的阻隔性能均与分子结构中占优的异丁烯链节上密集的侧甲基有关;NR罩体和CIIR罩体材料的Tg分别为-55oC和-36oC,说明NR罩体具有较好的低温使用性能,较大内摩擦损耗所导致的分子链运动能力减弱是CIIR罩体材料Tg较高的主要原因。This paper presents properties of faceblanks for two commonly used respirators based on NR and CIIR. The results show that under the existing practrical formula and curing conditions, NR faceblank offers tensile strength of 22.0MPa and tear force of 41.3KN∙m-1, higher than those offered by CIIR faceblank which are 13.2MPa and 35.5KN∙m-1, the mechanical superiority of NR faceblank is mainly derived from the strain-induced cyrstallization. Resiliences of NR and CIIR faceblanks are 60% and 16%, and diffusion coefficients of sulphur mustard in the two faceblanks are 2.10×10-11m2/s and 6.85×10-13m2/s, respectively. Low resilience and excellent barrier property of CIIR faceblank are due to the dense side methyl groups in the predominant isobutylene units. The Tg values for the NR and CIIR faceblank are -55oC and-36oC, suggesting the NR faceblank having a fairly good performance than the CIIR faceblank in cold weather. The weak chain segment motion ability originated from great internal friction is responsible for the high Tg value for CIIR faceblank.
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自己顶一个,大神乱入
纵使苦逼生活,也不能满身负能量……
2楼2015-12-14 19:51:14
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xpz-wdy: 金币+6, 翻译EPI+1, 有帮助 2015-12-15 19:49:25
表征的手段已经过去了,用一般过去时。而实验结果用一般现在时态。我删掉了一些多余的东西,所以整句话应该这样来翻译。
Abstract: In this paper, the properties of two face-pieces materials for respirators were respectively characterized (你的这句话只讲了一半,所以这里再加上一句,被什么仪器、什么检测手段或者什么方法所表征). Results show that the tensile and tearing strength of NR respirators are 22.0 MPa and 41.3 KN∙m-1 independently under the currently production condition, which is better than that of CIIR respirators because of the strain induced crystallization. Due to the congested methyl on the link of isobutene, the rebound ratio and diffusion coefficient of the CIIR is lower than that of the NR. Importantly, the Tg of the NR is lower to -55oC than that of the CIIR (-36oC), which indicates that NR face-pieces materials has an excellent performance in lower temperature. Moreover, the motion ability of molecular chain is weakened by large wastage of internal friction, which is major cause for high Tg value of CIIR respirators.
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3楼2015-12-15 13:58:37
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哈哈,谢谢楼上的。希望达人继续指点下
纵使苦逼生活,也不能满身负能量……
4楼2015-12-15 19:54:26
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xpz-wdy: 金币+5, ★★★很有帮助 2015-12-17 18:51:28
-1-  没必要写  “本文...”
-2-  先写出全名, 再缩写 NR / CIIR
-3-  数据太多, 读似实验室报告结论, 不像摘要
-4-  怎样证明: "内摩擦损耗... 是CIIR罩体材料Tg较高的主要原因"  ??
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5楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2015-12-17 12:54:59
-1-  没必要写  “本文...”
-2-  先写出全名, 再缩写 NR / CIIR
-3-  数据太多, 读似实验室报告结论, 不像摘要
-4-  怎样证明: "内摩擦损耗... 是CIIR罩体材料Tg较高的主要原因"  ??

非常感谢
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