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(1)The …… weakened the influence of ……on the ……这里的weakened可以吗??
(2)The A ions could increase depressing effects of……, while the B ions could not increase depressing effects …….A离子可以增加……的抑制性能,而B不能增加抑制性能,请问如何使句子地道 ?
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1、可以的: A weakened the influence of B on C...
2、The A ions could increase THE depressing effects of……, while the B ions could not increase depressing effects ……
depressing可以用suppressive,inhibitory等代替。
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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2015-12-08 09:43:14
1、可以的: A weakened the influence of B on C...
2、The A ions could increase THE depressing effects of……, while the B ions could not increase depressing effects ……
depressing可以用suppressive ...

第二个句子不地道,想改着地道些
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3楼: Originally posted by remenmber123 at 2015-12-07 21:13:09
第二个句子不地道,想改着地道些...

你可以把全句(中文)列出,我给你整理一下。
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4楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2015-12-08 10:17:55
你可以把全句(中文)列出,我给你整理一下。...

The A ions could increase depressing effects of B on C, while the D ions could not increase depressing effects of B on C.
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remenmber123: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2015-12-08 11:15:57
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5楼: Originally posted by remenmber123 at 2015-12-07 21:21:30
The A ions could increase depressing effects of B on C, while the D ions could not increase depressing effects of B on C....

为避免重复与单调,可以考虑:
In contrast to A ions, which can increase the depressing effect of B on C, D ions do not affect the inhibitory effect of B on C.
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6楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2015-12-08 10:44:17
为避免重复与单调,可以考虑:
In contrast to A ions, which can increase the depressing effect of B on C, D ions do not affect the inhibitory effect of B on C....

好,非常感谢
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