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明子眸: 金币+30, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 翻译的很好，受教了！我想知道，这几个实验结果怎么用一些连词把她们连接起来！谢谢！ 2015-11-23 21:32:07

做了一些修改，翻译过程中有些信息出现丢失现象，还有就是时态问题，描述实验结果时一般用一般现在时且在整个描述过程中时态保持一致。省略重复的词义，但不能省略强调的部分。下面是修改好的版本。
It can be seen from the figure that some micro-holes appear on the coarse surface of the coating which soaked in SBF for 1 week. After 2 weeks, the coating degrades gradually. After 3 weeks, some fish bone-like tissues are found on the surface. After 4 weeks, the coating surface degrades further,large blocks of honeycomb-like micro-holes appear. After 5 weeks, the coating surface further degrades and expose loose structure like dendrite. 6 weeks later, some large holes appears on the surface of the coating. Microporous and holes are helpful to increase the contact area between the coating and the simulated liquid, and promote the further degradation of the coating.

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