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eedaomi5

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自从去年9月开始雅思，整好一年，一年里经历了雅思的痛，惨淡的套磁回复，悲催的CSC，毕业的别离，彷徨待业的暑假。
一切都源于那个要出国的梦。如今幸运地得到那个offer。一切的不顺与顺利只是一墙之隔。
这一路来小木虫给了我很多的帮助，也认识不少志同道合的朋友，得到了很多的很多的鼓励，也和散金有了一个约定。
祝愿，正在路上的新虫和老虫们一切顺利，坚持就是顺利！挺过去也就都过去了！也祝我接下来签证顺利！

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eedaomi5: 回帖置顶 2015-09-05 10:47:57

重在经历与参与。当初搞文书的时候一头雾水，别说研究计划，陶瓷这些了，光找学校看导师背景就看的心塞。一步步走来，现在也完成一大半了。只有肯坚持下去，就算没有offer，也对得起自己的选择，起码做了自己想做的事情。各位虫子，共勉！

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eedaomi5: 回帖置顶 2015-09-06 11:20:16

祝贺楼主，我是新人一个，刚写了封套磁信，能帮我看看词汇语法和习惯用法上有没有问题吗，多谢啦！
Dear Prof. X X,

I am X X, a 2nd year Ph.D. candidate from school of X, X University of China, supervised by Prof. X X. And my major is X. To want to know whether an opening position for a visiting student is available, I write this letter.

Since, I have got an opportunity for application of the “Chinese Top University Graduate Students Studying Abroad” program, which will be sponsored by Chinese Scholarship Council. This program (6-24 months) will support Ph.D. candidates in China to study abroad as a visiting student for next year without any X University(外导的大学） degree. If my application for studying in your University is approved, Chinese Scholarship Council will sponsor all my expenses include the international traveling fare, daily cost, etc. Thus, I will be self-funded.

From the past year, I have participated in the national key research project of X X. When I Wrote the relevant chapters - X X, your excellent paper X X did inspire me a lot, and I will publish my paper X X at journal X X next month. I was also lucky to attend your lectures in X University and China X Archive when you came to Beijing in June this year, I have learned a lot which was different from the domestic scholars’. Your research field fit me so well.

My Ph.D. dissertation will discuss about “X X”. I attempt to reinterpret the relationship between X X and X X by using X X theory, how X X and X X affect X X, and to seek the evolution and development from those in19X0s to present in China. I consider you can give me a productive guidance, so I write to you to see if you can give me a chance to do further study under your supervision.

Attached please find my CV with details of my education, research interests and experience, publications. I am looking forward to your response.

With kindest regards,
X X

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301楼: Originally posted by 缺馅包子 at 2015-09-06 10:26:09
祝贺楼主，我是新人一个，刚写了封套磁信，能帮我看看词汇语法和习惯用法上有没有问题吗，多谢啦！
Dear Prof. X X,

I am X X, a 2nd year Ph.D. candidate from school of X, X University of China, supervi ...

我看了下，总体上还行，你这个还是得多花点功夫，一个句子一个句子的好好弄，里面你可多用些被动句，少用些I，比如说， I will publish my paper X X at journal X X next month 可改成one of my manuscript has been accepted by XX this month.
我帮你改了首段，
I am X X, a 2nd year Ph.D. candidate from school of X, X University of China, supervised by Prof. X X. And my major is X. To want to know whether an opening position for a visiting student is available, I write this letter.

I am X X, a second-year PhD. candidate from X, X University(top ten or X in China), supervised by Prof. X X. I am writing to inquire about the possibility to be a visiting student in your research group.
接下来的你自己先再改改吧（it is a process of DIY），如果需要你可以把改好了的发个我，

当然以上这些只是我的一家之言，接受与否在于你自己。

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