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这句话如何简练的表达
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The result shows that the average and the maximum RMS wavefront error in the whole field of view of 0.3°×0.15° are 0.063 and 0.068 respectively after the 4th alignment action with 3rd order model, and the average and the maximum RMS wavefront error in the whole field of view of 0.3°×0.15° are 0.025 and 0.011 respectively after the 3rd alignment action with 5th order model. 请问上面这句话怎么说简练一点？ 只有一次修改机会，本来不想冒险改的，不过看着实在太罗嗦 |
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| The result shows that the average and the maximum RMS wavefront error is 0.063 and 0.068 respectively after the 4th alignment action with 3rd order model, and after the 3rd alignment action with 5th order model, the error is 0.025 and 0.011 respectively, in the whole field of view of 0.3°×0.15°. |
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The result shows that the average and the maximum RMS wavefront errors in the whole field of view of 0.3°×0.15° are 0.063 and 0.068 respectively after the 4th alignment action with 3rd order model, and 0.025 and 0.011 respectively after the 3rd alignment action with 5th order model. 另动词时态可考虑是现在时还是过去时更妥。 |
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