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1、Hf:Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals with various [Li]/[Nb] ratios (0.85, 0.94, 1.05, 1.20 and 1.38) were grown by Czochraski technique. In this Report, we describe the defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals by IR transmission spectrum. 2、 The effective distribution coefficient of Hf4+ decreases with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts，while the effective distribution coefficients of Yb3+ and Ho3+ increase as [Li]/[Nb] ratio increases in the melts, which are less than 1. 3、The light-induced scattering of Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals was quantitatively measured via the incident exposure energy. The exposure energy of Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystal with the [Li]/[Nb] ratios of 1.38 is 763.84 J/cm2, approximately 326 folds than that of the Hf: Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystal ([Li]/[Nb]=0.85) in magnitude. 文章摘要，表述越精彩越好，重点是第二三句一定要改。麻烦大神了。拜谢！！！！ |
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怎么看上去这么熟悉？难道都是同一个人？ 1、Report为何用大写？we describe xxx by IR transmission spectrum读上去很怪，可以考虑改成：The defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals were determined by IR transmission spectrum. 2. 这不是另一个帖子的内容吗？那里我的建议是： The effective distribution coefficient decreases for Hf4+ and increases for Yb3+ and Ho3+ with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts. In all cases, [Li]/[Nb] ratio is less than 1. 3. ...326 folds than that of the...改为...326 folds more than that of the...；另外was、is等时态要统一。 |
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第二个调整一下： 1、Report为何用大写？we describe xxx by IR transmission spectrum读上去很怪，可以考虑改成：The defect structure and dopant occupancy of Hf : Yb: Ho: LiNbO3 crystals were determined by IR transmission spectrum. 2. 这不是另一个帖子的内容吗？那里我的建议是： The effective distribution coefficient decreases for Hf4+ and increases for Yb3+ and Ho3+ with the increase of [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melts. In all cases, the effective distribution coefficients are less than 1. 3. ...326 folds than that of the...改为...326 folds more than that of the...；另外was、is等时态要统一。 |
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你好，打扰下我想问问这句话 The effective distribution coefficient of dopant ion is calculated by comparing the concentration of dopant ion in crystal and the concentration of dopant ion in melt. 可以这么写吗 The effective distribution coefficient of dopant ion is calculated by comparing the concentration of dopant ion in crystal and in melt. 或者有什么更好的写法吗 |
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