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秋风.无痕

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[交流] 第一封陶瓷信,求鉴定有何不妥~~ 已有7人参与

Dear Prof. XX,
   
My name is XX and I am a 1st year Ph. D. candidate of Aircraft Control and Dynamics from XX University, P. R. China. I write this email to inquire the possibility in doing research as a Ph.D. student in your group.

The attached CV shows how the national and international aeromodelling competitions have provided me with rich experience in UAV design and production and strong sense of teamwork.
Coupled with these work placements, several curriculum designs have equipped me with expertise in aircraft design and micro controller application. I have developed a strong interest in  
unmanned rotorcraft navigation and control through these experiences. I read several of your papers and one of my seniors, a graduate student in NUS, suggested that I can approach you for continuing my studies.   

Please let me know if there is a possible opening for a graduate student in the upcoming spring or fall terms. My grades are good; The overall and major GPA for my undergraduate are 3.60 and 3.67 respectively. In the past year, I have just got requested credits for Ph.D. and the grades are perfect. In particular, I took several elective courses on control theory (e.g. optimal control, intelligent control, etc.) which I am very interested in. I would like to join your research group, because my research background matches your research topics very well and I am quite interested in working with you world leading scientists.   

I am available to discuss this possibility further, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

XX
目标导师搞多旋翼飞行器控制,有个团队,在新加坡国立,我的情况是本科毕业直博一年级,刚完成直播的课程,想出去读,有一些国内和国际大赛经验和奖项,但无paper,英语还没考,请各位师兄们瞅瞅我这第一封陶瓷信有啥不妥么?准备尽快发了,谢谢啦~
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skymisshello

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本来还想用那个 模板,,这下感觉还得多方面参考哈
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写得很好,就是有点长,精简10%就可以了

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donggobler

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my grades are good, the grades are perfect, because my research background matches your research topics very well...这种话就不要说了,GPA, CV 都在那,好不好,适不适合,人家自有定论,表现出自己对这个方向浓厚的兴趣,有激情才是关键。
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qixiandong

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说实话,句子水平真的挺一般。。I 。。。I...太多了。不用连词,没有层次,读起来是不是自己都难受。
我i们都是小孩子
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