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| 1.Many thanks for the reviewer’s suggestion. This study sufficient proved the protective effect of Xanthan gum against sodium nitroprusside-induced apoptosis in vitro according to our present work. Our next work will focus on the mechanism of Xanthan gum blocks chondrocytes apoptosis in vitro and the detailed relationship between NO and PGE2 will be clarified. We sincerely hope you focus on our next paper. |
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这英文写的太差了，怎么能用来回复编辑的问题? “This study sufficient proved the protective effect of Xanthan gum against sodium nitroprusside-induced apoptosis in vitro according to our present work.” 1. sufficient proved改为has proved sufficiently 2. protective effect of Xanthan gum against 改为protective effect of Xanthan gum on 3."according to our present work"和“This study”重复，多余 正确的句子： This study has proved sufficiently the protective effect of Xanthan gum on sodium nitroprusside-induced apoptosis in vitro. “Our next work will focus on the mechanism of Xanthan gum blocks chondrocytes apoptosis in vitro and the detailed relationship between NO and PGE2 will be clarified.” 这是什么句子？语法错的都不知道到哪儿去了。 正确的句子： Our next work will focus on the mechanism of the inhibitory effect of Xanthan gum on the apoptosis of chondrocytes in vitro and the detailed relationship between NO and PGE2. “We sincerely hope you focus on our next paper.” 你把这句话放在这里想达到什么目的？让他们关注你下一篇论文？这不是开玩笑吧？删了！ |
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暮云深: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-05-21 08:45:40
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1.Many thanks for the reviewer’s suggestion. This study sufficient proved the protective effect of Xanthan gum against sodium nitroprusside-induced apoptosis in vitro according to our present work. Our next work will focus on the mechanism of Xanthan gum blocks chondrocytes apoptosis in vitro and the detailed relationship between NO and PGE2 will be clarified. We sincerely hope you focus on our next paper. First we would like to thank this reviewer for his/her helpful suggestions. We believe that in this we have provided sufficient evidence to support the fact that there is protecting effect of Xanthan gum against nitroprusside-induced apoptosis in vitro. ssssllllnnnn 讲得对，这篇文章还没搞定，不用提及其他无关的事。再说即便有下篇，也不一定是同一个人审，对吗？ |
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