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小兰花: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢。 2015-04-07 09:56:53
1、some 可以用several代替；
2、based on expound的expound应该是动词，这样是不合适的，可以换为：based on expounding 或者based on the description of .....
3、可以考虑不重复class-advisor for international students
In this paper, several suggestions are proposed to improve the work quality of the class-advisor for international students based on expounding the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students.
In this paper, several suggestions are proposed to improve the work quality of the class-advisor based on expounding the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students. |
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