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文章在阐述了留学生班主任工作的素质要求的基础上提出了改进留学生班主任工作的几点建议。 【翻译】： 表述1： In this paper, some suggestions are proposed to improve the work quality of the class-advisor for international students based on expound the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students. 表述2： In this paper, some suggestions are proposed to improve the job performance of the class-advisor for international students based on expound the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students. |
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小兰花: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢。 2015-04-07 09:56:53
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1、some 可以用several代替； 2、based on expound的expound应该是动词，这样是不合适的，可以换为：based on expounding 或者based on the description of ..... 3、可以考虑不重复class-advisor for international students In this paper, several suggestions are proposed to improve the work quality of the class-advisor for international students based on expounding the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students. In this paper, several suggestions are proposed to improve the work quality of the class-advisor based on expounding the quality requirements of class-advisor for international students. |
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