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myloveaping

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[求助] 求助,投稿英文论文语法与句子间架结构问题。英文功底好大侠能否给个指点啊! 已有1人参与

如题,书到用时方恨少....
学了三十几年的母语,每次撰写汉语学术论文,撇开参考文献,拍脑袋是写不出来几句像样的句子的。母语的撰写功底都是如此的差。真是很惭愧啊!
最近投了一篇外文文章,审稿人&编辑说有些句子存在语法和间架结构的问题。我自己也在修改,但还想征求更多人的意见,请求英文功底修炼较好的大侠,给咱赏上两眼,指点,指点吧!
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1.The most sophisticated of those mechanisms deploy antibodies and killer cells to those recognize and eliminate specific invaders, respectively.

2.However, a study of the peptides from plants, especially as far as their antitumor, antioxidant well as anti-hyperglycemia activities are concerned, has not progressed as quickly as in the case of other compounds.

3.Despite of they are small low molecular weight proteins, their achieve antibiotics function using an extremely diverse range of structural and compositions motifs.

4. It observe on conductivity and potential independence of channel situation and conclude that bioactive seeds peptides from semen cuscutate

5.The results shown that samples from carrot seeds and Anethum graveolens that assumed peptides increase conductivity of BLM with formation of single channel of two types.


6.it show decreased virulence the possibility that the pathogen defense system against antimicrobial peptides may show specificity toward the peptide type has been suggested
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myloveaping: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, 非常感谢! 2015-01-10 12:38:43
每一句话都有这样那样的问题,是需要好好修改一下。如果通篇是这样的话,审稿人很难有耐心读完,更别说给你好的评价了。
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语法错误不少,先把语法解决了吧,每个词/短语做到有理有据,建议借鉴一下参考文献里的语句

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3楼: Originally posted by zhswee at 2015-01-10 00:59:43
语法错误不少,先把语法解决了吧,每个词/短语做到有理有据,建议借鉴一下参考文献里的语句

非常感谢您的教导!
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