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[求助] 没人管,第一次proof,大家给看看,我回答的对不对啊 已有2人参与

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Q3 In the sentence beginning “Ellagic acid…” should “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxybenzopyrano 5,4,3-cdebenzopyran-5,10-dione” be changed to “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxychromeno[5,4,3-cde]chromene-5,10-dione”?
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Q2 We have checked the information about all authors and their names` spelling are right.

Q3 In the sentence, it should be changed to “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxychromeno[5,4,3-cde]chromene-5,10-dione”.

Q4         This sentence should be changed as “The high fat diet was prepared by adding 15% lard oil and 0.1% cholesterol in the normal diet by this company, respectively.”

Q5 The sentence should be changed as “However, changes of body weight and food utility index were different with those in food intake.”

Q6 The sentence should be changed as “Similar levels between MG and LPEA were observed in LDL-C, but it in the MPEA and HPEA groups were decreased by 33.22% and 35.88% compared with MG.”

Q7 The sentence should be changed as “Moreover, dietary PEA promoted the efflux of cholesterol through raising the excretion of bile acids, a similar effect as simvastatin.”
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yangwg8088

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
ai芥末润: 金币+10, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-12-25 19:33:52
就按你的校稿就可以了

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
ai芥末润: 金币+10, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-12-25 19:34:03
我昨晚也是proof了一篇RSC的,反正他帮我改了几点,我认为都对的就接收就是了。按你上面的可以了吧
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