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Q3 In the sentence beginning “Ellagic acid…” should “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxybenzopyrano 5,4,3-cdebenzopyran-5,10-dione” be changed to “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxychromeno[5,4,3-cde]chromene-5,10-dione”?
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Q3 In the sentence, it should be changed to “2,3,7,8-tetrahydroxychromeno[5,4,3-cde]chromene-5,10-dione”.

Q4 This sentence should be changed as “The high fat diet was prepared by adding 15% lard oil and 0.1% cholesterol in the normal diet by this company, respectively.”

Q5 The sentence should be changed as “However, changes of body weight and food utility index were different with those in food intake.”

Q6 The sentence should be changed as “Similar levels between MG and LPEA were observed in LDL-C, but it in the MPEA and HPEA groups were decreased by 33.22% and 35.88% compared with MG.”

Q7 The sentence should be changed as “Moreover, dietary PEA promoted the efflux of cholesterol through raising the excretion of bile acids, a similar effect as simvastatin.”

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