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5句英语，两个标点，2个小问题求指导语法
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1. The apparatus used for non-contact measurement, which simultaneously measures elongation and torsion angle of the specimen uses two independently operating laser sensors. 这句话是否有不能不改的语法问题？我读了感觉（1）少了一些定冠词（2）elongation and torsion angle应该用elongational and torsional angle 2. The study was carried out until the failure of each of the specimens. 这句话是否有不能不改的语法问题？句子的意思应该是试验一直进行到每个试件失效。我觉得 carried out until连在一起用感觉有歧义 3. the corrections in the velocities of kinematic forcing and displacement were introduces in order to meet in each load case the established time criterion. in each load case 和the established time criterion的顺序是否一定要对调 4. It should be noted how the shape of the notch influences the F-u graph. 这句话写在英语论文中是否合适？是否有点口语化？ 5. an example method能这么说吗？是不是必须是an exemplificative method 6. The increase of the notch radius, increases the critical torsional angle.里的逗号是否一定要去掉 In order to carry out nonlinear numerical calculations using the finite element method it was necessary to know the values of material parameters. 句子，it was前是否一定要加逗号 7. It is mean that +从句对吗？是否一定要是It means that 8. 英文论文是不是不应该出现we开头的主动式？而应该用被动语态？ |
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翔于天下: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1 2014-11-26 09:14:03
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1. The apparatus used for non-contact measurement, which simultaneously measures elongation and torsion angle of the specimen uses two independently operating laser sensors. Looks perfectly fine to me. elongation and torsion angle也是可以的。 2. The study was carried out until the failure of each of the specimens. Looks perfectly normal to me again. You can use to instead of until if you like. 3. the corrections in the velocities of kinematic forcing and displacement were introduces in order to meet in each load case the established time criterion. "in each load case 和the established time criterion的顺序是否一定要对调". 对调后更清楚，不对调也未尝不可。在我看来，更重要的问题应该是were introduced （而非introduces） 4. It should be noted how the shape of the notch influences the F-u graph. Not a problem at all. 5. an example method能这么说吗？是不是必须是an exemplificative method ”an example method“是成立的，只是不知道上下文想具体说什么。 6. The increase of the notch radius, increases the critical torsional angle.里的逗号是否一定要去掉： 当然要去掉！ In order to carry out nonlinear numerical calculations using the finite element method it was necessary to know the values of material parameters. 句子，it was前是否一定要加逗号：不一定，都可以，凭你喜欢与习惯。 7. It is mean that +从句对吗？是否一定要是It means that ”It is mean that“ 没有这种说法，你可以说It is meant that 8. 英文论文是不是不应该出现we开头的主动式？而应该用被动语态？ No such thing。 But personally, I never start a sentence by "we...". 不是绝对，但一般少用。 |
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