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麻烦英语好的帮忙看看下面这话有没有什么问题，或帮忙改写，谢谢！ It is possible that A may improve non-bone metastasis-free survival for estrogen positive patients involve a mechanism independent of osteoclast mediated, but might have no effect on tumors outside of bone for estrogen negative patients. |
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Is this about Selective Estrogen Receptor Modulators (SERMs)? 1、I believe you are talking about estrogen receptor, not estrogen; 2、"mediated" is not required in your sentence. 3、others as shown in CAPITALS in the revised sentence. It is possible that A improves non-bone metastasis-free survival for estrogen RECEPTOR (ER) positive patients, involving a mechanism independent of osteoclast PATHWAY, but has no effect on tumors outside of bone for estrogen RECEPTOR negative patients. |
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