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二审后要求润色，只有一个reviewer2的意见，说英文太差，但一审时竟然没说？！ 已有5人参与
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外审意见如下： 好打击，说通篇英文都有问题，不过可能确实是。但是一审时还有审稿人说这篇文章well-writen. Reviewer #2: Dear Sir, I have gone through the paper and could find the possible areas where the work needs massive improvement before further reviews:（是不是说明还需要更久的审稿时间，比如三审、四神，OMG!） Comments 1. In recent years, the human fertility was seriously influenced by-should be written as "In recent years the physiological aspects of human fertility have had been seriously influenced by-"and almost 1 in 20 of the male population was affected by male infertility"- should be written as "almost 1 out of 20 male has been affected by male infertility". 2. " Ample evidences are still deficient to support the internal mechanisms between natural compounds and male infertility"-should be reframed as "ample evidences are scanty to support the internal interactions between natural compounds with male infertility". 3. "strengthening yang herb"-what is the meaning of this phrase? 4. How radix is an active ingredient on the male infertility treatment-what does "radix" mean? 5. "Almost 15% of couples failed to conceive with regular unprotected intercourse over a year"-reframing of the sentence is required. 6. The overall language of the paper is poor. The authors need to check the whole paper with the help of professional English writers who can check spelling, grammar with subject-verb agreement which can improve the overall quality of the text. 7. "safety became a novel option with gradually concerns"-what is the meaning? 8. "Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) have beneficial"-check the subject-verb agreement. 9. " now still a better option"-should be "now" or "Still" in the sentence. 10. "Different processed products of Morinda officinalis F.C. How were compared the pharmacological effects for tonifying kidney and supporting yang on the kidney-yang. 11. "deficiency mice model, and all of the four processed products of Morinda officinalis .C.How could improve the symptoms of the kidney-yang deficient mice. (Cui et al, 2013). administration of Morinda officinalis F.C. How can alleviate the kidney impairment induced by 'Kidney-yang deficiency syndrome' through the established metabonomic method and the regulated metabolic pathways involve energy metabolism, transmethylation and ransportation of amine" -the whole paragraph carries no meaning. 12. Introduction should be written properly. Overall standard of English is really poor carries no sense. |
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