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翔于天下: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★有帮助 2014-11-15 22:22:29
1.下面两句哪种说法更好？我倾向于用一个长句，但是觉得这个长句的主语是否有问题？
As the key structure of an aircraft, the fatigue life of the wing spar should be taken into account in the original design, due to its high difficulty of repair.
2.随着到孔边距离的增加，应力逐渐减小到名义应力：
With the increase in distance to the edge of the hole, the stress is gradually reduced to nominal stress。
3. 一段距离内，材料内的应力相等：
Within a given distance, the stresses of the material are equal.
4. 两端的孔比中间位置的孔承受更大的载荷:
Holes at both ends are subjected to greater loadings than those in the middle position.
5. 20倍显微镜:
20x microscope
6. XXX的一端
One end of XXX or the end of XXX
7. XX缺少YY:
XX lacks YY; XX is lack of YY; Without YY, XX...
8. 其他同类飞机:
Other similar aircraft
9. 中：A和B分别描述的XX、YY与ZZ的关系:
A and B are used to describe the relationship between XX and YY, as well as YY and ZZ, respectively.
英：A and B describe the relationships between XX, YY and ZZ, respectively.
问：上面这种翻译是否可以？我的原意是A描述XX与ZZ，B描述YY与ZZ |
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