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八角寨

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[求助] 润色一句话【英译汉】,谢谢。

Conventionally, there are two kinds of mechanisms to explain grain rotation: one is the decrease in grain boundary free energy, the other is the coupled motion associated with  grain boundary migration. The former often gives rise to grain coalescence and grain growth stagnation usually accompanied by the formation of coincidence site lattices. For the latter mechanism, the GB free energy may increase with angle for the low-angle  grain boundaries, which has also been verified by simulations.

【翻译】:传统上有两种机理来解释晶粒旋转:一种是晶界自由能的减少;另一种是伴随晶界迁移的耦合运动。前者通常会导致晶粒合并与晶粒长大停滞,通常还伴随形成重合位置点阵。后者机理,晶界自由能可能随着小角度晶界的角度的增加而增加,该机理已被模拟所证实。
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4楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-11-06 10:01:24
我说呢!中文翻译的很好很到位。...

谢谢。
我感觉最后一段没有翻译好,逻辑性不太好。

后者机理,晶界自由能可能随着小角度晶界的角度的增加而增加,该机理已被模拟所证实。
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真强必胜: 金币+1, 谢谢 2014-11-06 10:18:46
这次的句子好很多很多!
Conventionally, there are two kinds of mechanisms to explain grain rotation,(i.e.,) decrease in grain boundary free energy and the coupled motion associated with grain boundary migration. The former often gives rise to grain coalescence and grain growth stagnation usually accompanied by the formation of coincidence site lattices. For the latter mechanism, the GB free energy may increase with angle for the low-angle  grain boundaries, which has also been verified by simulations.

英文中很难看到中文中常用的冒号(:),你这种情况用逗号就好,两种几种直接点名就可以了,特别后面你还会分别叙述。
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2楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-11-05 23:17:17
这次的句子好很多很多!
Conventionally, there are two kinds of mechanisms to explain grain rotation,(i.e.,) decrease in grain boundary free energy and the coupled motion associated with grain bounda ...

谢谢你的再次帮忙。
这次是【英译汉】,标题有说明。
非常感谢你的帮忙。
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3楼: Originally posted by 八角寨 at 2014-11-05 20:56:47
谢谢你的再次帮忙。
这次是【英译汉】,标题有说明。
非常感谢你的帮忙。...

我说呢!中文翻译的很好很到位。
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