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真强必胜: 金币+1, 谢谢 2014-11-04 14:54:59
wxqtjw: 金币+15, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-11-06 11:10:14
原句中有多处问题：
1、invovled的这种用法应该是不行的，如果一定用这个词（其实这是中文说法），则应：In paper 1, studies involved in......
2、第二句话前后时态不统一：study和was also studied
3、感觉上damping该有个对象才好，就是damping of xx
基于你的原句做些许修改：
In paper 1, the effect of the defect at interface of NiCrAlY/Superalloy on the damping was preliminarily studied. In this paper, the impact of the defect in the entire Ni/Cu coating system on the damping and the effect of element diffusion on damping capacity were further investigated. |
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