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真强必胜: 金币+1, 谢谢 2014-10-19 21:07:33
15150681606: 金币+8, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2014-10-24 10:54:40
你可以要求精确、简短，但你给出的中文是在是罗嗦、重复，既不像科研语言，又不像科普术语。我给你精确、简短一下：
还有证据表明，叶酸有助于预防结肠癌等恶性肿瘤，维生素D有助于钙吸收并降低骨质疏松的发病率，维生素E则能降低心脏病的风险。
按你的原话，其实google翻译的很不错（There is also evidence that taking folic acid can help prevent colon cancer and prevention of cancer, vitamin D helps calcium absorption and reduce the incidence of osteoporosis, vitamin E can reduce the risk of heart disease.）你是可以直接用的, 但内中有一错误：vitamin D helps calcium absorption and reduces (这里需要单数形式).......
但我更愿意按我修改过的中文翻：
Accumulated evidence suggests that folic acid helps prevent colon cancer and other malignancies, vitamin D helps calcium absorption and reduces the incidence of osteoporosis, vitamin E reduces the risk of heart disease. |
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