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Dear xxx,

Your manuscript xxxx of which you submitted the REVISED  version to Propellants, Explosives, Pyrotechnics, has been reviewed.  The comments of the referee(s) are included at the bottom of this letter.

A revised version of your manuscript that takes into account the comments of the referee(s) will be reconsidered for publication.

You can upload your revised manuscript and submit it through your Author Center.
Note: when submitting your revised manuscript, you will be required to respond to the comments made by the referee(s) in the space provided.

Once again, thank you for submitting your manuscript to Propellants, Explosives, Pyrotechnics and I look forward to receiving your revision.


Sincerely,


Mrs. Stefanie Mutterer
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pep@ict.fraunhofer.de


*** Referee(s) Comments to Author   ***
Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
This paper requires ... extreme ... editing into English language that would be understandable by people who are interested in the subject of target penetration by shaped charges (especially those people for whom English is not their primary language).  In the paper's current form, too many non-conventional words are used with such poor grammar that the paper is only understandable with great effort by someone who is well-versed in the topic.  However, the paper does present a well-constructed example of experimentation, modeling and computation that should prove useful to other researchers.

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Please find attached a revised Word-file from the reviewer. I´m not really happy with it because there were still some inconsistences e.g. the reviewer didn´t give the reference [7] of Luttwak, but maybe you can use it as a proposal to improve your manuskript.
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