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Sand in desert, sand in wind.
Sad like wind in desert.
Desert is bare, so is sad.

Sand in bottle, sand in time.
Sad like time in bottle.
Bottle is filled, so is sad.

Sand in hand, sand in eyes.
Sad like tears in eyes.
Hand wipe tears, while sad in tears, ever.

Sand in beach, sand in tide.
Sad like tide swallow beach.
Ebb and flow make shell out, shine, however.

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6Â¥: Originally posted by rchiuctw at 2014-08-26 16:19:58
Nice poem, another good trial

yeah, thank you.
listen to the voice in flower.
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2Â¥: Originally posted by lppv at 2014-08-23 15:04:20
how nice£¡£¡

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fungixx: ½ð±Ò+2, you always have some words to say~ :D:D 2014-08-27 19:02:23


Well done, elegant words definitely.

I enjoy your poem.  Make me recall the poem " To see a world in a grain of sand".


To see a world in a grain of sand
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.


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4Â¥2014-08-23 21:48:53
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4Â¥: Originally posted by Xiedanhui at 2014-08-23 21:48:53
Well done, elegant words definitely.

I enjoy your poem.  Make me recall the poem " To see a world in a grain of sand".


To see a world in a grain of sand
And a heaven in a wil ...

thank you for your remarks.  
listen to the voice in flower.
5Â¥2014-08-24 12:47:21
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