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满谛

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sand

Sand in desert, sand in wind.
Sad like wind in desert.
Desert is bare, so is sad.

Sand in bottle, sand in time.
Sad like time in bottle.
Bottle is filled, so is sad.

Sand in hand, sand in eyes.
Sad like tears in eyes.
Hand wipe tears, while sad in tears, ever.

Sand in beach, sand in tide.
Sad like tide swallow beach.
Ebb and flow make shell out, shine, however.

                                                            2014/8/23


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Xiedanhui

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fungixx: 金币+2, you always have some words to say~ :D:D 2014-08-27 19:02:23


Well done, elegant words definitely.

I enjoy your poem.  Make me recall the poem " To see a world in a grain of sand".


To see a world in a grain of sand
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.


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4楼2014-08-23 21:48:53
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how nice!!
人活着好没意思啊
2楼2014-08-23 15:04:20
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2楼: Originally posted by lppv at 2014-08-23 15:04:20
how nice!!

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4楼: Originally posted by Xiedanhui at 2014-08-23 21:48:53
Well done, elegant words definitely.

I enjoy your poem.  Make me recall the poem " To see a world in a grain of sand".


To see a world in a grain of sand
And a heaven in a wil ...

thank you for your remarks.  
listen to the voice in flower.
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Nice poem, another good trial
零星落索,一贫如洗,两袖清风,三餐不继,四壁徒空,五内如焚,六神无主,七窍生烟,八方受敌,九死一生,十分危殆,百感交集,千夫所指,万念俱灰
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are you a poet~
几年前踏上火车那一刻都还没有意识到,从此故乡只有冬夏,再无春秋
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7楼: Originally posted by fungixx at 2014-08-27 19:01:27
are you a poet~

I'm a student and study in Chinese medicine, and I like to write poem.
listen to the voice in flower.
8楼2014-08-27 20:24:35
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6楼: Originally posted by rchiuctw at 2014-08-26 16:19:58
Nice poem, another good trial

yeah, thank you.
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9楼2014-08-27 20:25:15
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8楼: Originally posted by 满谛 at 2014-08-27 20:24:35
I'm a student and study in Chinese medicine, and I like to write poem....


Chinese Traditional Medicine? Good major.

Well done. Girl still hold your ground in this chaotic world and the age of the death of poet.

Looking forward to hearing more beautiful poems from you. ...
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10楼2014-08-27 20:56:17
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