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夏若书

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[求助] 我根据大家的意见修改了一下套瓷信,希望大家继续帮我提意见,不胜感激! 已有3人参与

大家给我的套磁信提了很多有用的意见,非常感谢,我根据大家的意见修改了一下套瓷信,本人的英文水平不好,希望大家继续帮我提意见,不胜感激!

Looking for a PhD position in your group

Dear Prof. XX

It is of great honor for me to contact you for the application of a PhD position in your group because I have found my research background matches your research in the field of plasmonic very well.

My name is Weixiang Ye, a master student majored in Microelectronics & Solid State Electronics from Nankai University, P. R. China. I have read your homepage and read some of your papers (e.g., “XX” and “XX”), from which I was inspired a lot.

Based on my research experiences, I think that it could be a good idea to use XX to enhance the locally electromagetic field, which is an effective way to improve the sensitivity of plasmonic gas sensor in your papers. We can build a dual measurement system which combines XX and XX to report two parameters in one local chemical reaction. Therefore, I write this email to inquire the possibility in doing research as a Ph.D. student in your research group after I complete my graduate study at June next year (2015).

My research experience ranged from synthesis of silver and gold spheres, surface plasmon resonance biosensors, to the microchip. Till now, I have some output for the research. I have finished five academic papers in this field.  

Finally, thank you for taking time off your busy schedule to read this letter.  I have enclosed my CV, research proposal and supplementary information for my CV in this email. Please feel free to contact me if it is interesting to you. Your favorable consideration of my application will be greatly appreciated.

Best regards,
XX
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夏若书: 金币+5, 有帮助 2014-08-17 12:42:21
就是别扭,还是别扭~哎,你接着改吧,任重而道远

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夏若书: 金币+5, 有帮助, 好的,感谢你的意见 2014-08-17 11:23:38
文章有一些长,再稍微减少一些吧,
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2楼2014-08-17 11:21:42
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楼主,第一段不用那么多套话,直接就说你想申请他的研究生。
你第二段说到他的research对你有很积极的影响,你可以补充说下在你那一方面的研究有影响,比如ideas啊,证明方法之类的。然后说完之后就直接把你的第四段放后面,简要介绍你的research experience和科研成果,发表的如果是国际期刊的话可以把杂志名称写出来。。
说完之后接下来就直接"Based on my research experience, ...." 然后直接说“You can find my detailed research proposal in the attachment”,然后表明自己可以"benefit from your teaching and guidance in achieving my academic goals"
最后一段感谢他读你的信,希望可以得到他的回复就可以了,比如“Please give me a feedback at your convenience, I'll appreciate any time you can give me.”。
收拾好行李,走一条新路,呼吸新鲜空气。
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3楼: Originally posted by luguang1023 at 2014-08-17 11:49:18
楼主,第一段不用那么多套话,直接就说你想申请他的研究生。
你第二段说到他的research对你有很积极的影响,你可以补充说下在你那一方面的研究有影响,比如ideas啊,证明方法之类的。然后说完之后就直接把你的第四 ...

兄台,你太给力了,十分感谢
4楼2014-08-17 11:51:49
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