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当颗粒的半径分别为3μm, 2μm和1μm时,比率AAA的值近似为1时所需的BBB分别为 8%, 5%和3%。
【翻译】:When the radii of particles are 3, 2 and 1 μm, the ratio AAA is approximate 1 which requires BBB are 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.
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2楼: Originally posted by 自私的猫1988 at 2014-08-10 10:26:25
When the radii of particles is 3, 2 and 1 μm, BBB required for the value of ratio AAA approximating 1 is 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.

感谢。
BBB required for the value of ratio AAA approximating 1 is 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.

句中其它保持不变,将 approximating能否改成approximately equals
是否妥当?
谢谢。
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2楼: Originally posted by 自私的猫1988 at 2014-08-10 10:26:25
When the radii of particles is 3, 2 and 1 μm, BBB required for the value of ratio AAA approximating 1 is 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.

非常感谢。
required for the value of ratio AAA approximating 1 is
这个句型还有更好的表述吗?
谢谢。
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2014-08-10 10:44:16
The requirement that the radii of the particles were 3, 2 and 1 μm and that the approximate value of the ratio of AAA is 1 is that BBB is 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.

是不是给弄复杂了点?
BBB是不是该换成the percentage of BBB?
4楼2014-08-10 10:39:55
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修改我的句子:
后半句的“is” 应该为was,或者将前半句的were改成are
The requirement that the radii of the particles were 3, 2 and 1 μm and that the approximate value of the ratio of AAA is 1 is that BBB was 8%, 5% and 3%, respectively.
5楼2014-08-10 10:43:27
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