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fzxiaofeixia

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[求助] the average increase was more than 1-fold,这种表述有问题么?请高人指点 已有2人参与

大修后的稿件,编辑只让修改下面的问题:
Editor’s comments
I do not understand "1-fold improvement"? Doesn't this mean NO improvement?
Please reword

晕啊,这个句子是我修改稿时自己改的,原稿中的句子是,A。。。。,the average increases were greater than 100% compared with B

修改后的句子是:A。。。。,the average increase was more than 1-fold compared with B

文中的意思,A的量是B的两倍,我想表达的意思是A比B增加了1倍,我改句子的主要原因是the average increases were greater than 100% compared with我是从别的文献上搬过来的,所以想改下,结果还改出问题了,现在自己都有点晕了


请问各位高人,这个句子怎么写比较合适啊,如果改为原稿中的句子,我应该怎么回复编辑?
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fzxiaofeixia

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哎,是不是因为问题太幼稚了啊?大牛们不愿意出手帮小弟啊
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fzxiaofeixia: 金币+5, ★有帮助, 谢谢参与 2014-07-22 09:19:43
The indicy of A almost doubled that of B, which showed significant(p<0.01) improvement from A to B.

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fzxiaofeixia

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2楼: Originally posted by zhcas at 2014-07-22 01:55:30
The indicy of A almost doubled that of B, which showed significant(p<0.01) improvement from A to B.

这个不需要进行统计分析的,只想说明A比B增加时超过了1倍
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fzxiaofeixia

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急啊,请高手帮忙啊
4楼2014-07-22 09:50:32
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