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[求助] Bioresource Technology编辑意见求助已有4人参与

随着审稿意见,编辑也给了一条建议:
the guide for authors states, for supplementary material: "Since supplementary files will be published only as an electronic annex to the online article, and not in the print version, such material should not be referred to directly in the text. However, it may be mentioned in a sentence following the conclusion." Please respect this instruction

我稿件中的设计到补充材料的原文大概是
"The lignin extractability, the recovery and composition of the residues and outcomes of enzymatic digestion of polysaccharides were shown in Table  S1, and the time courses  of enzymatic hydrolysis of rice straw before and after  aqueous IL solution pretreatment  were  shown  in  Figs.  S1-5“
"Besides,  xylan  removal  during pretreatment  would  also  make  a  contribution  to  the  improvements  in  the  subsequent enzymatic  saccharification (Fig. S6)"
"We also examined the relationships between the reducing sugar yield and pH of aqueous IL solution (Fig. S7)"

在修改稿中我在补充材料中添加了一个Fig. S1, 参照上述编辑意见,我做了如下修改,其实就是修改了图标号(因为添加了一个新图),然后按照编辑的建议在结论后面添加了一句话
”we studied rice straw pretreatment with aqueous solutions of various cholinium ILs (Fig. S1) “
”The lignin extractability, the recovery and composition of the residues and outcomes of enzymatic digestion of polysaccharides were shown in Table S1, and the time courses of enzymatic hydrolysis of rice straw before and after aqueous IL solution pretreatment were shown in Figs. S2-6“
”Besides, xylan removal during pretreatment would also make a contribution to the improvements in the subsequent enzymatic saccharification (Fig. S7),“
在conclusions 后面添加了:
”5. Supporting information
Tables S1, S2 and Figs. S1-8 are available as supporting information.“

提交后,编辑又针对这个问题给了一个类似的批注(如下),显然是认为我没理解他所说的。
Comments:
As steted by the guide for authors, supplementary material must be considered as an annex. As a result, it cannot be cited explicitly in the text, just a sentence placed after the conclusion can mention it is available.

显然,我的确是没明白”such material should not be referred to directly in the text“ ” it cannot be cited explicitly in the text“是什么意思。然后我查了一下bioresource technology近期发表的一些论文,再做了如下修改
.......various cholinium ILs (Fig. S1, available as Supplementary data)......
.......were shown in Table S1 (Available as Supplementary data), and the .......pretreatment were shown in Figs. S2-6 (Available as Supplementary data)
.......enzymatic saccharification (Fig. S7, available as Supplementary data).......
Table S2 (Available as Supplementary data).......
.......queous IL solution (Fig. S8, available as Supplementary data)....
在Acknowledgements部分后添加了:
Appendix A. Supplementary data
Supplementary data (Tables S1, S2 and Figs. S1-8) associated with this article can be found, in the online version, at

编辑还是认为我没懂他的意思,没修改到位
Comments:
You have added a sentence after the conclusion about supplemùentary material, but citations in the text are still present (see for example lines 42 and 53, p 7) and several other places. Please remove them now.

然后,我就把上面文中所有的available as Supplementary data删了,其他都没有改变
例如:.......various cholinium ILs (Fig. S1, available as Supplementary data)......改为.......various cholinium ILs (Fig. S1)......
在Acknowledgements部分后面添加的没有任何变化
Appendix A. Supplementary data
Supplementary data (Tables S1, S2 and Figs. S1-8) associated with this article can be found, in the online version, at

还是收到编辑的回信,这次他很不耐烦了,也是一个这样的破事搞了这么久,就因为我英文烂,换成谁,谁都烦
Comments:
The last letter requested you to remove citations of supplementary material in the text. You were given, as an example, citiations in page 7. It is strictly obvious that this removal had to be done everywhere relevant in the manuscript!!! Now everybody wastes time on this matter.

各位大虾帮忙看看这个”such material should not be referred to directly in the text“ ” it cannot be cited explicitly in the text“到底是什么意思?应该具体怎么修改,如果这次再搞错了,恐怕编辑就直接给我拒了。
是不是不能表述为”......were shown in Table S1.....“,而必须将Table S1放在括号中?
还有就是在Acknowledgements部分后面添加的那部分是不是要改成如下所示,因为其他论文中Supplementary data 这个词后面都没有具体的图表名称 ”(Tables S1, S2 and Figs. S1-8)“。所以是不是需要删了?
Appendix A. Supplementary data
Supplementary data associated with this article can be found, in the online version, at


还请明白人指点一下,谢谢!
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6楼: Originally posted by 夜初雨 at 2014-08-13 23:52:17
请问前辈,bioresource technology 上补充材料在哪里上传啊?我原稿里没有补充材料,被砍成简讯,篇幅缩短好多,然后有3个图1个表都放补充材料里了,但是刚刚上去一看,没有补充材料的选项哎?是直接在图和表里传还 ...

在上传文件(也就是最后一步)时,下拉菜单中有上传补充材料的选项。
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newslx: 金币+4, 有帮助 2014-07-13 20:04:02
把你这些数据得到的结论写出来,在合适位置表明(see supporting information或者see SI),不需要Table 1之类的,编辑的意思是你SI中的东西无需详细脱出,而是总结
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2楼: Originally posted by 自私的猫1988 at 2014-07-12 21:01:23
把你这些数据得到的结论写出来,在合适位置表明(see supporting information或者see SI),不需要Table 1之类的,编辑的意思是你SI中的东西无需详细脱出,而是总结

谢谢!
但是我看到的所有已经发表在Bioresource Technology上并带有Supplementary material的论文,都是采用标明了具体的Table S1或者Fig. S1之类的呀。这个编辑搞得我真是还不理解。
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newslx: 金币+4, 有帮助 2014-07-13 20:04:13
你本身的做法是没有错的,我以前投的里面也带了补充材料,那个编辑就没说什么,只是不同的编辑要求不一样,你现在要做的就是顺着编辑的要求做,对于补充材料的结果你就说一下结论,不要带“supplementary”及其图表号,全删了,就ok了,先顺着编辑搞。
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4楼: Originally posted by 含笑天天 at 2014-07-12 23:21:27
你本身的做法是没有错的,我以前投的里面也带了补充材料,那个编辑就没说什么,只是不同的编辑要求不一样,你现在要做的就是顺着编辑的要求做,对于补充材料的结果你就说一下结论,不要带“supplementary”及其图表 ...

谢谢,先试试吧,真怕编辑一不高兴就给干掉了。
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请问前辈,bioresource technology 上补充材料在哪里上传啊?我原稿里没有补充材料,被砍成简讯,篇幅缩短好多,然后有3个图1个表都放补充材料里了,但是刚刚上去一看,没有补充材料的选项哎?是直接在图和表里传还是怎样啊?跪求指教啊!
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3楼: Originally posted by newslx at 2014-07-12 22:23:18
谢谢!
但是我看到的所有已经发表在Bioresource Technology上并带有Supplementary material的论文,都是采用标明了具体的Table S1或者Fig. S1之类的呀。这个编辑搞得我真是还不理解。...

我也准备投这个,我觉得是fig.s1之类的首先肯定不能有。有比较多文章有supplementary data出现,这就有点笼统概括了,最严格就是所有这些字眼都不能出现,你就描述结论即可。读者不明白自然就去找你的supplementary data了。

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7楼: Originally posted by newslx at 2014-08-14 18:40:32
在上传文件(也就是最后一步)时,下拉菜单中有上传补充材料的选项。...

我看见下拉菜单是这个样子的,指的是Supplementary Interactive Plot Data这个?还是还在后面的步骤里啊?
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9楼: Originally posted by 夜初雨 at 2014-08-15 10:11:55
我看见下拉菜单是这个样子的,指的是Supplementary Interactive Plot Data这个?还是还在后面的步骤里啊?

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对,就是Supplementary Interactive Plot Data
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