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jsliu880

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[求助] 请高手帮忙修改一句话。谢谢!

背景知识:已知B能通过静电吸引吸附到A物质表面,另外C和B也能通过静电吸引形成CB复合物。我要描述这样的意思:当A过量时,需要消耗更多的C才能使B脱离A的表面形成CB复合物。
The excessive A needed more C to snatch B from the surface of A formation CB complex.
请高手帮忙修改一下上句语法,谢谢!
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jsliu880: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, 谢谢 2014-06-05 00:22:51
The more excess of  A ,the more amount of C is required    for the  snatch of B from the surface of A to form CB complex.
你看行不?
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RXMCDM: 金币+1 2014-06-02 22:07:02
With A excess,  more C is required to form a CB complex as B is detached from the surface of  A.

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RXMCDM: 回帖置顶 2014-06-03 16:30:51
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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-06-01 23:04:15
The more excess of  A ,the more amount of C is required    for the  snatch of B from the surface of A to form CB complex.
你看行不?

不行!
   改: "More C is required TO snatch B from the surface of A to form CB complex"
再改: "In the presence of excess A, more C is require to snatch B from the surface of A to form CB complex"
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[感谢奖赏]
  The same electrostatic attraction that causes B to form a coating over A is also responsible for CB complex formation  [The concentration of] C must increase in lockstep with [that of] A or else CB complex won't form at all in the presence of excess A
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RXMCDM: 回帖置顶 2014-06-03 16:34:25
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4楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2014-06-03 10:09:18
不行!
   改: "More C is required TO snatch B from the surface of A to form CB complex"
再改: "In the presence of excess A, more C is require to snatch B from the surface of A to for ...

为何不行,能如此臆断?excess: more than is neccessary,reasonable or acceptable ;~(OF STH).还execss A
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6楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-06-03 16:34:19
为何不行,能如此臆断?excess: more than is neccessary,reasonable or acceptable ;~(OF STH).还execss A...

Q: 为何不行?
A:
  OK: "As A reaches an excess..."
  NO: "more excess"..... 过犹不及
  有时间再细谈
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