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柠檬树

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[求助] 一篇文章直接接收,但是,highlights需要符合要求,求助各位

不超过五个点,且每个点不超过85个字符(包括空格),求助修改下面的这个:
1. A new MR film with the structure of “antiferromagnetic layer/pinned soft magnetic layer/ non-magnetic MgO spacer layer/sensitive NiFe layer” was designed.
2. The elements with a Wheatstone bridge circuit were fabricated using photolithography.
3. An improved signal including the reduced noise and good magnetic stability was achieved.
4. The magnetostatic coupling can act as a small stabilizing field leading to the coherent rotation of the magnetic moment in the sensitive NiFe layer.
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柠檬树

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这种问题英文再好也帮不了,字数超了,不知道你研究什么的人怎么知道哪些可以省略,第1点光引号里的专用名称就超85字符了
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mac194

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RXMCDM: 金币+1 2014-05-22 00:22:11
[感谢奖赏]  [大写字母 = 新输入]
1. A new MR film FEATURING “antiferromagnetic/pinned soft magnetic/non-magnetic MgO spacer/sensitive NiFe” was designed
2. Elements with Wheatstone bridge circuits were MADE BY photolithography
3. A LESS NOISY, MORE MAGNETICALLY STABLE signal was achieved
4. A DEMAGNETIZING FIELD INDUCED BY** magnetostatic coupling CAUSES coherent rotation of magnetic momentS in the sensitive NiFe layer

文法:
- 只一句话,不需句点
- 效仿其他文章, "层" = "/" 不需空格

参考文献:
  https://sundoc.bibliothek.uni-ha ... ne/03/04H051/t3.pdf [看图]
In the case of magnetic films with finite lateral extension [不过长] the generation of “magnetic poles” near its ends gives rise to a magnetic field called demagnetizing field.

Theory of Magnetostatic Coupling in Thin-Film Rectangular Magnetic Elements
  https://digitalcommons.unl.edu/c ... text=physicstsymbal

**专利: US6055136
专利: US5408377  
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一篇文章直接接收,但是,highlights需要符合要求,求助各位
demagnetizing field.jpg

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RXMCDM: 金币+1 2014-05-22 00:22:04
柠檬树(RXMCDM代发): 金币+10, 多谢应助! 2014-06-16 12:45:52
[感谢奖赏]
IMPROVEMENTS:
1. MADE “antiferromagnetic/pinned soft magnetic/non-magnetic MgO spacer/sensitive NiFe” MR film
2. MADE BY photolithography elements with Wheatstone bridge circuits
3. Achieved a LESS NOISY, MORE MAGNETICALLY STABLE signal
NOTE:
4. DEMAGNETIZING FIELD INDUCED BY magnetostatic coupling CAUSES coherent rotation of magnetic momentS in the NiFe layer
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一篇文章直接接收,但是,highlights需要符合要求,求助各位-1
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