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八角寨

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[求助] 润色一句话,汉译英,谢谢。

在退火过程中,温度通过晶界迁移率对晶粒长大过程产生直接影响,而不均匀温度场影响晶粒长大的本质原因是不均匀晶界迁移率对晶粒长大的影响。

翻译:The grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process during annealing, and the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain grown due to the influence of the nonuniform grain boundary mobility on grain growth.

希望可以符合英文科技表述,简明扼要,谢谢。
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clearsky7228

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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2014-03-27 20:11:58
八角寨: 金币+4, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢帮忙。 2014-03-28 14:54:43
During annealing, the process of grain growth is influenced directly by the mobility of grain boundaries  while  the primary cause  of the influence on grain growth from a nonuniform temperature field is the  influence of grain growth from the nonuniform mobility of grain boundaries.
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RXMCDM

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During annealing,the grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process , while the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain growing was due to the influence of the nonuniform grain boundary mobility on grain growth.

英文科技表述不太明白,只是按照原翻译的意思修改。During annealing应该修饰全句,不只是前半句,应该提前,原句成了单独修饰前半句。
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八角寨

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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-03-27 19:01:29
During annealing,the grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process , while the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain growing was due to the influence of th ...

感谢版主。
文中的“本质原因”在因为表述中,是否有必要翻译进去呢?
如果翻译更好,该如何加进去呢。
谢谢帮忙。
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3楼: Originally posted by clearsky7228 at 2014-03-27 19:47:28
During annealing, the process of grain growth is influenced directly by the mobility of grain boundaries  while  the primary cause  of the influence on grain growth from a nonuniform temperature fiel ...

感谢帮忙。
from a nonuniform temperature field 中,为什么是用from呢?谢谢。
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