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在退火过程中，温度通过晶界迁移率对晶粒长大过程产生直接影响，而不均匀温度场影响晶粒长大的本质原因是不均匀晶界迁移率对晶粒长大的影响。 翻译：The grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process during annealing, and the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain grown due to the influence of the nonuniform grain boundary mobility on grain growth. 希望可以符合英文科技表述，简明扼要，谢谢。 |
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During annealing,the grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process , while the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain growing was due to the influence of the nonuniform grain boundary mobility on grain growth. 英文科技表述不太明白，只是按照原翻译的意思修改。During annealing应该修饰全句，不只是前半句，应该提前，原句成了单独修饰前半句。 |
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助！ 2014-03-27 20:11:58
八角寨: 金币+4, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢帮忙。 2014-03-28 14:54:43
RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助！ 2014-03-27 20:11:58
八角寨: 金币+4, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢帮忙。 2014-03-28 14:54:43
| During annealing, the process of grain growth is influenced directly by the mobility of grain boundaries while the primary cause of the influence on grain growth from a nonuniform temperature field is the influence of grain growth from the nonuniform mobility of grain boundaries. |
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八角寨: 金币+8, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢。为了和前半句的has统一时态，后半句的was我改成is了。 2014-03-28 14:54:32
八角寨: 金币+8, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢。为了和前半句的has统一时态，后半句的was我改成is了。 2014-03-28 14:54:32
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肯定要翻，直接加副词就行了，During annealing,the grain boundary mobility has a direct influence on the grain growth process , while the influence of a nonuniform temperature field on grain growing was essentially due to the influence of the nonuniform grain boundary mobility on grain growth. |
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