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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 2014-02-22 09:23:42
cilva34: 金币+10, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢~ 2014-02-22 16:37:11
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During his commencement speech, Mr.Li Ka Shing encouraged each of us to "continue strive for happiness, dignity, and variety" in life but to do so responsibly and with integrity so all of us can "stand out and achieve great success while besieged by negativity"

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Mr.Li Ka Shing concluded his commencement speech with the following (words of encouragement):
  "Rest assured that if all of you can pursue happiness, dignity and personal fulfillment responsibly and with integrity, all of you will stand out, all of you will achieve success, and all of you can rise above the pettiness that is all around us"

避免纠纷,不用 "corrupting influence" 一类的话
"besieged by negativity" = 逆流 (力求自我反思)
"pettiness" = 鸡毛蒜皮小事,但不归咎任何人
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cilva34: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢~长辈写个小文章,引用了这句话而已。 2014-02-22 16:36:52
The end of Mr.Li Ka Shing  commencement  speech at  Shantou University: "If you can exhaust all  your loyalty,all  your  efforts on the way of responsibility  to live  a colourful, happy life of  dignity,  who else can make future great success  ?Who else will be the most outstanding? Who else can remain undefiled in spite of general corruption? Only you!"
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Mr.Li Ka Shing  应为  Mr.Li Ka Shing's
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其实翻译别人的书或话的话一般要经本人同意,或者知识产权所有者同意,翻译过程中有歧义的地方一定要向其请教,以免引起误译。向楼主这样未经同意就拿来翻译,实属恶搞。去找找有没有授权翻译,以其授权的为准!
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