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mlshmily

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[交流] Revise-大修还是小修?第二个审稿人什么意思? 已有14人参与

收到Elsevier期刊的审稿意见:Revise。
但不知道大修还是小修,似乎是Elsevier的审稿意见模板。好像是修改重投,是新投稿吗?
另外,第二个审稿人什么意思?有人说比较危险,他是拒审的意思,可能因为论文太差了。
还有戏吗?
请明白人点拨一二。谢谢!

Dear XXXX,

The reviewers have commented on your above paper. They indicated that it is not acceptable for publication in its present form. However, if you feel that you can suitably address the reviewers' comments (included below), the Editor In Chief invites you to revise and resubmit your manuscript.

Please carefully address the issues raised in the comments.

If you are submitting a revised manuscript, please also:
a) outline each change made (point by point) as raised in the reviewer comments
AND/OR
b) provide a suitable rebuttal to each reviewer comment not addressed

Yours sincerely,

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: I think this manuscript addressed an interesting and potentially promising topic. Also, it is obvious that the authors did an extensive search on the existing reports and research literature. However, I feel that this paper have some areas that need to be addressed.

First, I disagree with the authors' organization of contents……...

Second, …….

Third, the paper should shorten the section on …….

Fourth, ……

Finally, the writing in some sections can be improved (e.g., the last paragraph in page 3).

I hope the authors find the review helpful and wish them good luck with their research in this area.

Reviewer #2: The work is interesting but I wasn't convinced that the discussion or conclusions achieved that much apart from saying the obvious. I did like the way the discussion drew down data from a number of sources thus providing an uninformed reader with a range of good background facts and figures. I would have preferred to see more ambition in the paper's aim. There are many minor errors - often the definite article is missed out, quite a number of spelling errors, some references are very old yet are used to support current understanding. These all need attention. I thought the sources of data were in need of more care. There are other sources that are probably better than some that are mentioned.
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23楼: Originally posted by mlshmily at 2014-02-06 13:54:36
谢谢鼓励,没经验啊。很多修改意见不能很好地领会。...

没事的,从简单到复杂依次解决问题!多看几遍审稿意见,把握审稿人问的问题的核心是什么!可以参考虫子们的意见,在木虫上我是受益颇多!

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我觉得审稿人2认为你的研究方向是好的,但是怀疑你的研究结论:“wasn't convinced that ……achieved that much apart from saying the obvious.”
除此之外,两个审稿人都认为文章逻辑结构以及语言存在很大的问题。
我觉得你是不是推理过程不足以支撑你的结论,有点言过其实了,直白说就是有点吹了
这个真要好好的改一改,先饱满点增加工作量把问题阐述清楚,然后再组织逻辑结构,最后改语言吧

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