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八角寨

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[求助] 润色一句话,中译英,谢谢。

但上述模拟研究并未考虑AAA对BBB的影响,而实验[10]的研究表明AAA对BBB有显著影响。

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But the simulation studies above did not consider the effect of AAA on BBB , and the experimental study in Ref[10] showed that AAA have significant effects on BBB.

请高手帮润色,希望英文表述准确,简明扼要,符合英文科技文语言习惯。
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2014-01-20 19:23:24
八角寨: 金币+2, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢版主。 2014-01-21 20:36:05
These  simulated  studies did not consider the impact of AAA on   BBB, however, experiments [10] showed that AAA has a significant effect on BBB.
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2014-01-20 19:23:16
However, the simulative studies above did not consider the effect of  BBB from AAA, while the experiments [10] showed  that AAA had a significant effect to BBB.
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2014-01-20 19:23:08
However, the results of experiment 10 showed a significant effect of AAA on BBB which was neglected in the simulation study above.
结论在前,事实背景在后,符合英文行文习惯
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dailun20: 金币+1 2014-01-21 19:50:57
( 感谢奖赏 )
Despite evidence to the contrary [Ref 10], these simulation studies did not consider how AAA would affect BBB.
  -或-
Contrary evidence notwithstanding [Ref 10], .... (同上)

  句首强调力强,问题是如何确认模拟研究作者恣意疏忽
  would = will 的过去式,语意较弱,算放模拟研究作者一马
  近义词提示: research study = 研究活动 --> 实证结果 = empirical results
  these = 复数代名词,如经大番结研讨才得原文显示之结论,则可考虑改用 "the aforementioned"
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八角寨: 金币+8, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢版主帮忙。 2014-01-21 20:35:45
The experiment studied in Ref[10] showed that AAA has a significant effect on BBB, while the above simulation studies did not consider the effects of AAA on BBB. 我觉得只需要把语序调换一下即可~不知道楼主满意不~
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The simulation above has not considered the effect of AAA on BBB, which was shown notable in the report[10].
追求的比现有的多一点,需求的比现有的少一点。
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dailun20

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谢谢!
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