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[求助] 润色一句英文，要比较地道的英语

为了定性地考察锰离子之间的磁相互作用的强度，将四个锰离子之间的耦合关系简化，使用一个耦合常数J来考察。
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between manganese ions, we simplify the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ions by using one coupling constant J to investigate.
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zyxr: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★有帮助 2014-01-16 19:36:09
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by introducing the coupling constant J.
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2楼: Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2014-01-16 16:12:16
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by introducing the coupli ...

感觉意思有点不对，本句意思是使用一个耦合常数J来简化模型，不是两个三个不同的J，所以感觉意思不对。
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3楼: Originally posted by zyxr at 2014-01-16 18:11:44
感觉意思有点不对，本句意思是使用一个耦合常数J来简化模型，不是两个三个不同的J，所以感觉意思不对。...

哦，你自己的翻译也有那个意思。那么这样子呢？
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ions were simplified and investigated by introducing the coupling constant J.
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In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations among the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by introducing a coupling constant J.
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In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling model among the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by introducing a constant J.
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4楼: Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2014-01-16 18:35:00
哦，你自己的翻译也有那个意思。那么这样子呢？
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ...

恩啊，我自己琢磨这句很久了，哎，总是感觉写的不好，你翻译的比我的好哈
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4楼: Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2014-01-16 18:35:00
哦，你自己的翻译也有那个意思。那么这样子呢？
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ...

就是感觉最后的introducing the coupling constant J.
表达的意思不到位
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6楼: Originally posted by zhenwuhuang at 2014-01-16 18:37:41
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling model among the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by introducing a constant J.

你和楼上的唯一不同就是一个单词 the变成了a, 我觉得不好的地方就是最后的introducing a constant J 表达的不到位.
帮忙想想有没有更好的表达方式
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4楼: Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2014-01-16 18:35:00
哦，你自己的翻译也有那个意思。那么这样子呢？
In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations between the four Mn(III) ...

In order to qualitatively evaluate the magnitude of the magnetic interaction between the manganese ions, the coupling relations among the four Mn(III) ions were simplified by employing of one J value for complicated case.
看看这样翻译怎么样。
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