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Lorenzo et al [4, 5]. reported that the optical characterization of Mg2+  ions in KiNbO and in KiNbO: MgO crystals . Keyan Li, Congying Kang and Dongfeng Xue [6] reported that the lattice occupation of HF 4+and Mg2+ions inKiNbOcrystals.
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piao_19850: 金币+11, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2014-01-06 22:46:24
已经改掉两个地方了,引用6改为 Li  et al 然后再参考文献列出Keyan Li, Congying Kang and Dongfeng Xue [6],改为Li  et al [6] 一般中文名应该  Li Keyan,是不是你的杂志有特别的规定?不太肯定,如果没有,也要改过来。that 后面如果没有其他,也要去掉。
Lorenzo et al [4, 5] reported the optical characterization of Mg2+  ions in KiNbO and  KiNbO: MgO crystals . Li  et al [6] reported the lattice occupation of HF 4+and Mg2+ions in KiNbO crystals.
以上单从语法、文法考虑,还有你想说什么?看看单词用对没?
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Lorenzo et al [4, 5] reported that the optical characterization of Mg2+  ions in KiNbO and  KiNbO: MgO crystals . Keyan Li, Congying Kang and Dongfeng Xue [6] reported that the lattice occupation of HF 4+and Mg2+ions in KiNbO crystals.
文献6的引用用不着列3个作者,也用不着用全名,像4,5即可。
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piao_19850: 金币+4, ★★★很有帮助 2014-01-06 22:46:15
我觉得语法上也存在一些问题。由于report后面不是that从句,因此,两个that应该删掉。
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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2014-01-06 18:40:55
Lorenzo et al  reported that the optical characterization of Mg2+  ions in KiNbO and  KiNbO: MgO crystals . Keyan Li, Congying Kang and Dongfeng Xue  reported that the lattice occupation of HF 4+and  ...

审稿人说这两句有问题,没有其他问题吗?谢谢你
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