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【activity】Paraphrase practice three
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Today our sentences are: This work involves experts and many good submission over the past years, but in the end it is not applied. I wish you good luck, because there are many challenges being in high office. You can choose one of them or all of them to paraphrase. Up to you. All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing" Feel free to subscribe it. http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562 I will give you guys a sentence or sentences on a regular basis. Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can. You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you want. As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs. For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here. My translation: Years of work by an expert panel, drawing on thousands of submissions, has come to nothing. I wish you all the best for the rigors of high office that inevitable lie ahead. [ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-2 at 06:19 ] |
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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:45:35
Lopemann: 金币+4, Looks pretty great! Thanks mate! 2014-01-04 08:45:56
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:45:35
Lopemann: 金币+4, Looks pretty great! Thanks mate! 2014-01-04 08:45:56
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YOURS: This work involves(or involved?) experts and many good submission over the past years, but in the end it is not applied. I wish you good luck, because there are many challenges being in high office. my version: A piece of work that was carried out by various professionals and under great comformity failed to come into application at last. Luck attached to yourself for being in a high postion, you are always surrounded by myriad challenges.  |
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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:53:56
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Here is the version I provide. Hope it helps. Years of work by an expert panel, drawing on thousands of submissions, has come to nothing. I wish you all the best for the rigors of high office that inevitable lie ahead. @talkthisover @20090472 @zixinjuan @00waterh |
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Lopemann: Sorry mate. No sofa anymore 2014-01-02 19:12:25
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Lopemann: 金币+3, Your paraphrase is good! But you seem to have misunderstood it...basically the idea is the sentence is that hard work for years is wasted. 2014-01-03 11:55:26
Lopemann: 金币+3, Your paraphrase is good! But you seem to have misunderstood it...basically the idea is the sentence is that hard work for years is wasted. 2014-01-03 11:55:26
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We have got used to ask experts for advices before we have to deal with something,but finally we solved it in our own way.Because things are always changing,different analyses is conbined with different conditions. [ 发自手机版 http://muchong.com/3g ] |
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